I tried so hard to win, I threw away the prize
There were things I could not alter, so I had to let them slide
I’ve been aching for somebody
Who will never ache for me
I let the darkness in
Now the darkness will not leave
I wasn’t born to love, but love still follows me around
I learned to hold my tongue while my friends went underground
There are changes in the weather
That simply baffle me
I let the sickness in
Now the sickness will not leave
The regime still runs like clockwork, and the people are serene
But no one really knows what goes on behind the scenes
I wish that I could blame someone
But that someone might be me
I let the panic in
Now the panic will not leave
(2012)
An interesting poem about an influential songwriter. I especially like the following lines. They recall Cohen’s lines: “They sentenced me to twenty years of boredom/ For trying to change the system from within.”
The regime still runs like clockwork and the people are serene
But no one really knows what goes on behind the scenes
thanks…I had “Waiting for the Miracle” in my head when I wrote this 😊
Very touching! Thank you for following my blog.
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I love this..It is a song..has such a good beat..This happens to me, I think I am writing a poem, but it’s really lyrics that want to be sung….I hope you do that with this one..I love the essence and the rhythm!
https://jimwingrove.bandcamp.com/track/the-darkness
thanks, I like it too…take care 🌷🌷🌷
I mean I hope you have put it to music 🎶
another version ..i used to record my songs 😯 https://jimwingrove.bandcamp.com/track/the-darkness-2-2
Oh thank you..I listened..It’s really good…and the phrase is so catchy, “I let the darkness in …etc” I really enjoyed hearing it. Congratulations!
thanks, stay cool 😎
I try 🙂 oh here is my one song I actually made and daringly put it out there:)
https://karimahoisan.com/2021/03/25/the-cold-road-a-song-with-images/
sounds great…it’s fun to put songs together…thanks for sharing 👍👍
I like the rhythm and the message behind your words — and I agree, it’s a beautiful song.
PS Thanks for visiting my place and following. I look forward to following along here!
Thank you and welcome 😊
Bam! It’s wonderful, and I think Cohen would agree. 😀
That is so nice! thank u 😊
You’re welcome. Cheers.
Lovely words, you really like his music !
This is so good!
Love this so many lines in it work..🦋
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Welcome dear! Yes, of course. I started in the Corona era to avoid stress. Now it has become a part of my life. I’m more on WordPress.
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Thank you!
Definitely Cohen-esque – and a bit Orwellian. I like the line about the regime. Great lyrics.
Great, thank you 😊
You’re an excellent lyricist! L Cohen would be proud. Bravo!
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Great poem, 🥰
Thank you so much
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So sad
thanks it’s from 2012
It’s good anyway. I love Leonard Cohen. He does great lyrics
he is the best 👍
He really is. Smiles
I couldn’t find anywhere to put a comment or a Like on today’s Post but I just wanted to tell you how very much I enjoyed it,. Thanks for sharing.
Gwen.
Thank you for your interest ❤️❤️
Good writing! Enjoyed reading it!
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Nice blog!
Thank you very much 😊
I so relate 🙏🏼🙌🏼 very accurate and beautiful
Thank you, that means a lot to me 👍
well done! many tx for sharing with us 🙂
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This was such a beautiful poem!! So many emotions and feelings between your words. Really enjoyed reading this!🌠
Thank you so much…I wrote it just for you 😁😁
Very nice one.🌹🌹
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Dear Jim,
This is a commendable poem. Well done!
Happy Easter to you soon!
Yours sincerely,
SoundEagle
Thank you, Happy Easter 🙏🙏
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Awesome!
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This is gorgeous writing and what a talent he was.
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Love,love love need I say more !! Thanks have a great day!💕💯💕🙏
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You’re welcome my friend 🙏😊💪
I’ve tried to make everything right, I was ignorant of my surroundings and not mentally sound and I am sorry. Did I get everything?
fine 😁😁
Thank you, I’m going to try to relax tonight and take care of myself. Hope you have a great evening.👍🌸💖
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Beautiful poem💞
Lamentation of all people out there, struggling for a better world.
Sometimes life is not fair, but we keep moving courageously ❤️❤️❤️
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This is truly brilliant.
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Such an profound poem Jim.
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You’re welcome
Thoughtfully deep and intriguing … Mr Cohen would approve …
” Nothing left to do
When you know that you’ve been taken
Nothing left to do
When you’re begging for a crumb
Nothing left to do
When you’ve got to go on waiting
Waiting for the miracle to come
When you’ve fallen on the highway
And you’re lying in the rain
And they ask you how you’re doing
Of course you’ll say you can’t complain
If you’re squeezed for information
That’s when you’ve got to play it dumb
You just say you’re out there waiting
For the miracle, for the miracle to come”
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Absolutely loved this! I have been a Cohen fan for all my 66 years. He is definitely an iconic inspiration to many. The last true gentleman. I had the pleasure and the honor of meeting him a few times in the late 60’s and early 70’s.
thanks.. he was one of the best 👍👍